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Sometime, it's weird when I start questioning myself on a decision I'd just made. Imagine having half of your brain deciding on an action while the other half is stuck with millions of question to answer. The worse part -- these questions were opposing the action which had just been decided. I fear that my sudden blooming happiness was actually a test by the Devil. Maybe he wants to test my loyalty? I don't know. But I can't deny the fact that I am scared to lose her. I'm afraid that my love for her was just an illusion. A well-crafted one too. I mean, what are the odds of having a patient who's will to live is so strong? Plus, the idea of having an enemy like Gabriel helping me out just doesn't fit in!


Is the girl named Chloe real?

Or is it just an illusion to toy with my condemned heart ..


I'm starting to question my insanity and that is certainly not a good sign. No one likes me and I know why. I may not be perfect but heaven knows I try. I think I've dedicated my life to the dark side enough. Some of you might call it, 'turning over a new leaf' I presume. But, it's ironic for me to turn over a new leaf, I might burn the leaf even before it's able to turn over! Alright then, I'd better stop the ramblings. It's time to face the music.


Next stop -- HELL.


--


"Michael .. Michael .. Michael .. hihi .. there's a sweet ring to it .."


A girl could be seen lying down on her bed. Playing with her hair while thinking of a man or an angel, to be precise. She just couldn't believe her eyes. She tried convincing herself for the past few years -- to give up on love. Who on earth would want to marry someone like her? A person who would die anytime soon. The cost of maintaining her life would be a burden! Let alone, marrying her. Ironically, her assumptions were right. No one on earth really did love her. Somehow, a 'man' who's not from earth seemed to be attracted to her. For once in her life, she finally experienced love. Truthfully, there's no words to describe it.


"I must be really in love with him .. I can't stop thinking of his voice .. his eyes .. his touch and .. warmth."

"I can't wait to see him again .."


-knock, knock -


"Erm?"

"Weird .. usually the doc or even the nurses won't knock .. they would just come in .."


-knock, knock -


"Yes, anything? Just come in .. the door's not locked."


Two men walked in with much hatred. Each step taken was recognized as an opportunity. Their chances of gaining freedom are just a few inches away. There was an evil smile carved on each of their faces. They may seemed 'normal' in their human costume but that was all an act. They locked the room from the inside. Not wanting to draw any useless attention from the outside. Finally, it's time to end it.


"Erm .. you two don't look familiar .. are you new here?"

".."


They kept quiet as they couldn't be bothered.


"Why did you lock the door?"

".."

"W-Why are you looking at me that way??"

".."

"I think you got the wrong room--"


Chloe tried to pressed the emergency button; the red one. She knew something was wrong. She hoped that with that action alone could alert someone that she's in deep trouble. However, she couldn't reached helped. One man grabbed both of her hands and pinned it down.


"Let me go!"

"ARGH! SHUT UP WOMAN!"


Their voice didn't sound human at all. It was more of a roar. Even a lion would sound pussy compared to them.


"Who are you people? What are you??"

"YOU GOT NO ONE TO BLAME BUT YOUR BOYFRIEND!"

"TRUE! BECAUSE OF HIM WE HAD TO SUFFER MORE!"

"NOT LONG MY FRIEND .. ONCE WE KILL HER, WE'LL BE FREE!"

"HAHAHAHAHA"

"W-What are you .. t-talkin .. g .. abo ..about?"


Chloe was having difficulty to breathe again. Her body system is weak and she can't suffer one pressure after another.


"JUST TELL HER .. SHE'S GOING TO DIE ANYWAY! HAHAHA!"

"FINE .. WELL MISS HUMAN, WE'RE SATANS! WHAT MICHAEL DID REALLY FIRED UP THE BIG BOSS AND THAT MEANS BAD NEWS ! THE ONLY WAY TO TEACH THAT ANGEL A LESSON IS TO KILL HIS NEWLY FOUND LOVE. WHICH IN THIS CASE, YOU!"

"HAHAHA, YES. FINALLY, FREEDOM. LET'S KILL HER NOW! I CAN'T WAIT TO GET THESE CHAINS OFF MY BACK!"

"C-Chains?"

"HELL YEAH .. CHAINS! IT'S VERY UNCOMFORTABLE!"

"THIS HUMAN COSTUME IS ANNOYING TOO!"


One of them took of their 'annoying costume' and revealed their true ugly self. Rotten wings could be seen with slimes hanging at the very edge. His whole body was covered with red swollen flesh. With green eyes like a snake, long dirty hair and not to mention two curved horns. He truly lived up to his satan status.


"NOW THIS FEELS WAY BETTER!"

"Let me go! Please .. don't hurt me .. please .."

"AWW COME ON SWEETIE .. HAHAHA .. IT WON'T HURT A BIT!"

"No! Please! No!"

 

Her screams were nothing to them. Their voice alone could make a huge muscular man piss in his pants. Not to mention how the door to her room was sealed with dark magic; no one would be able hear nor could be bothered on the patient named, Chloe. It was as if she'd never existed in the first place! This seal was so strong, only those with high spiritiual power would be able to see it. Seeing it alone wouldn't do much help, the human race were not created to face such strong opponents. Those who's able to enter this battlefield are only of two species; angel and satan. Easier said, the two satans who visited her were not weak at all. They are among hell's best warriors, dealing with one of them alone would be tough enough.

Two?

Impossible.


--


Erm, this seem to me like a strategic area to open up a portal to hell. No one's around and yeah, this field is huge enough. Sometime I wonder, why can't we have a lift or something? I mean, we're in a modern era now -- hell should also follow suit. If it's too costly to install a lift down to hell, even an escalator would do. Seriously, this portal thingy is getting way too old. Anyway, I'm guessing this is going to leave another burning mark. Those stupid humans are going to analyze it and call my portal leftovers as a crop circle. How annoying. I can't control my excessive power and that is why sometime, there would be patterns left on the field. I swear they were born stupid. The only conclusion they could come up with would be the UFO's! I mean, please! Don't compare me with those green headed life-forms -- fyi, they're not even real!


- Ring, Ring, RinGGgGgg -


Argh, who the hell is calling me now? Not when I'm busy like this. Whoever called me must really be one brave soul!


"Who's this?!"

".."

"I'm not someone you would like to meddle--"

"..*cough*.. Michael .. it's me, Gabriel."

"Har?! .. *silent* .."

"Err, hello?? Michael??"

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!"


I burst into laughter. That's just so hilarious. I mean, he really did follow my advice! Gabriel the Messenger is now using a cellphone. This is like having LOL,LMAO and ROFL all rounded up together!


"Are you done laughing?"

"Hahaha .. no wait .. give me a few more sec--"

"I'm serious Michael."

".. haha .. erm .. okok .. gosh .. what's up?"


This is certainly weird. We're talking as if we're the best of friends.


"You won't like it .. but it's urgent."

"Like what?"

"I've got bad news .."

"Gab, if it's bad .. what are you waiting for? Shoot!"

"Fine .. fine. It's about Chloe--"

"Chloe?WHAT??WHY??"

"Calm down!"

".."


I could feel the blood in me flowing unevenly. It was like a volcanic lava - restless - as it wants to explode so badly. I swear I could feel the heat around me burning whatever left into dust.


".. well right now .. two Satanic Warriors is in her room."

"Why?"

"They want to kill her."

"Explain Gabriel .. I can't control myself anymore!"

"Lucifer .. he's furious about you going against him .."

"WHAT?? I did not do anything .. I-I just fell in love. Is that a sin?"

".. it is wrong .. in his eyes."

"But still .. why .. her!"

"He's not willing to lose you .. yet. So the best way to punish you is by--"

"Taking Chloe away from my life."

"Yes. There's a reward too .. for those whose able to kill her .."

"WHAT!?"

"Well, he's granting .. complete freedom. That's all the motivation they need to kill her .. Michael."

"I can't let this happen! I'm going to save her!"

"I'm trying to break into her room now .. but I can't enter .. the seal is too powerful .."

"They used their dark magic?"

"I think so .. I can't help her .. until you break this seal .."

"I know .. but I'm really far right now .. driving back .. would be impossible .."

"Then .. how?"

"Just wait for me .. I'm going to .."

"Yea?"

".. teleport there."

 

Angel part 6 here

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